Comments on: Chapter 1

By: lethe

lethe — Fri, 24 Oct 2008 14:00:00 +0000

You are a talented writer. I’m impressed with your powers of depiction.

By: Sarah

Sarah — Tue, 29 Jul 2008 01:48:58 +0000

Thanks. ^_^

By: Teresa Campbell

Teresa Campbell — Tue, 29 Jul 2008 00:34:38 +0000

Oh wow, that was so good. Made me feel as though I were flipping burgers and working in a greasy spoon. I can’t wait to read more.

By: Sarah

Sarah — Sat, 19 Jul 2008 23:41:49 +0000

Hi Tom. Thanks for reading.

Yes, I do pretty much “see” my stories as movies in my head. I think lots of writers do, but I do try to recreate the visual feel of my imagining as best I can.

By: Tom Duhamel

Tom Duhamel — Sat, 19 Jul 2008 07:45:27 +0000

Hi Sarah,
I dropped randomly while browsing for a researched. The site and the novel caught my attention, so I decided to leave the page open so I could spend more time at it latter. And guess what, hours later when I was done with the research, I decided to read this first chapter. And I loved it. No chance I could possibly miss the opportunity to read the rest of it.

I’m a writer myself. Not professionally, although I wish I could. I’m more at screenwriting though. All along my reading, I surprised myself imagining how I would convert your prose to a screenplay, and since you are the descriptive kind of writer I think that would be quite easy to do. You are a visual person, aren’t you?

Keep up the good work. And I’ll try not to clutter the comment area of all of the chapters as I read through lol

Tom

By: Sarah

Sarah — Sat, 24 May 2008 01:05:00 +0000

Cool. Thanks.

By: Shauna

Shauna — Sat, 24 May 2008 00:38:47 +0000

I always see you commenting on Adam’s story, and I just realized you have your own story over here. (I’m really slow.)
You’re a good writer, Sarah. I’m going to keep reading . . . :)

By: Sarah

Sarah — Fri, 23 May 2008 22:32:01 +0000

Thank you. And I’ve also had those “workday part deux” dreams . . . mostly when I worked third shift and dove right into bed after getting home. I am pretty sure nothing overly interesting happen in mine, either, just the drudgery relived. shudder

By: Bacchante

Bacchante — Fri, 23 May 2008 16:13:46 +0000

Found my way here through a series of links in my persuit of entertainment, and I've been enjoying your writing quite a bit. I also like your site's appearance, despite a habitual dislike of pink.

What drew me out of my lurking hole was the comment Liseli made about dreaming about work. That happened to me all the time when I worked in fast food, but it was exactly like real life, no variations or hidden fantasies. Just come home from a long shift, and re-work it in my sleep. That sucked >.<

By: Sarah Suleski

Sarah Suleski — Sat, 03 May 2008 11:39:41 +0000

Thank you.