Comments on: Chapter 1 http://srsuleski.com by Sarah R. Suleski Sat, 11 Oct 2008 09:45:47 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Sarah http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-1/#comment-1710 Sarah Tue, 29 Jul 2008 01:48:58 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-01/#comment-1710 <p>Thanks. ^_^</p> Thanks. ^_^

]]> By: Teresa Campbell http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-1/#comment-1709 Teresa Campbell Tue, 29 Jul 2008 00:34:38 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-01/#comment-1709 <p>Oh wow, that was so good.  Made me feel as though I were flipping burgers and working in a greasy spoon. I can't wait to read more.</p> Oh wow, that was so good.  Made me feel as though I were flipping burgers and working in a greasy spoon. I can’t wait to read more.

]]> By: Sarah http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-1/#comment-1658 Sarah Sat, 19 Jul 2008 23:41:49 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-01/#comment-1658 <p>Hi Tom.  Thanks for reading. :)</p> <p>Yes, I do pretty much "see" my stories as movies in my head.  I think lots of writers do, but I do try to recreate the visual feel of my imagining as best I can.</p> Hi Tom.  Thanks for reading. :)

Yes, I do pretty much “see” my stories as movies in my head.  I think lots of writers do, but I do try to recreate the visual feel of my imagining as best I can.

]]> By: Tom Duhamel http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-1/#comment-1648 Tom Duhamel Sat, 19 Jul 2008 07:45:27 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-01/#comment-1648 <p>Hi Sarah, I dropped randomly while browsing for a researched. The site and the novel caught my attention, so I decided to leave the page open so I could spend more time at it latter. And guess what, hours later when I was done with the research, I decided to read this first chapter. And I loved it. No chance I could possibly miss the opportunity to read the rest of it.</p> <p>I'm a writer myself. Not professionally, although I wish I could. I'm more at screenwriting though. All along my reading, I surprised myself imagining how I would convert your prose to a screenplay, and since you are the descriptive kind of writer I think that would be quite easy to do. You are a visual person, aren't you?</p> <p>Keep up the good work. And I'll try not to clutter the comment area of all of the chapters as I read through lol</p> <p>Tom :)</p> Hi Sarah,
I dropped randomly while browsing for a researched. The site and the novel caught my attention, so I decided to leave the page open so I could spend more time at it latter. And guess what, hours later when I was done with the research, I decided to read this first chapter. And I loved it. No chance I could possibly miss the opportunity to read the rest of it.

I’m a writer myself. Not professionally, although I wish I could. I’m more at screenwriting though. All along my reading, I surprised myself imagining how I would convert your prose to a screenplay, and since you are the descriptive kind of writer I think that would be quite easy to do. You are a visual person, aren’t you?

Keep up the good work. And I’ll try not to clutter the comment area of all of the chapters as I read through lol

Tom :)

]]> By: Sarah http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-1/#comment-1182 Sarah Sat, 24 May 2008 01:05:00 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-01/#comment-1182 <p>Cool.  Thanks. :D</p> Cool.  Thanks. :D

]]> By: Shauna http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-1/#comment-1180 Shauna Sat, 24 May 2008 00:38:47 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-01/#comment-1180 <p>I always see you commenting on Adam's story, and I just realized you have your own story over here.  (I'm really slow.)  You're a good writer, Sarah.  I'm going to keep reading . . . :)</p> I always see you commenting on Adam’s story, and I just realized you have your own story over here.  (I’m really slow.) 
You’re a good writer, Sarah.  I’m going to keep reading . . . :)

]]> By: Sarah http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-1/#comment-1176 Sarah Fri, 23 May 2008 22:32:01 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-01/#comment-1176 <p>Thank you. :)  And I've also had those "workday part deux" dreams . . . mostly when I worked third shift and dove right into bed after getting home.  I am pretty sure nothing overly interesting happen in mine, either, just the drudgery relived. <em>shudder</em></p> Thank you. :)  And I’ve also had those “workday part deux” dreams . . . mostly when I worked third shift and dove right into bed after getting home.  I am pretty sure nothing overly interesting happen in mine, either, just the drudgery relived. shudder

]]> By: Bacchante http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-1/#comment-1169 Bacchante Fri, 23 May 2008 16:13:46 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-01/#comment-1169 <p>Found my way here through a series of links in my persuit of entertainment, and I've been enjoying your writing quite a bit. I also like your site's appearance, despite a habitual dislike of pink.</p> <p>What drew me out of my lurking hole was the comment Liseli made about dreaming about work. That happened to me all the time when I worked in fast food, but it was exactly like real life, no variations or hidden fantasies. Just come home from a long shift, and re-work it in my sleep. That sucked >.<</p> Found my way here through a series of links in my persuit of entertainment, and I’ve been enjoying your writing quite a bit. I also like your site’s appearance, despite a habitual dislike of pink.

What drew me out of my lurking hole was the comment Liseli made about dreaming about work. That happened to me all the time when I worked in fast food, but it was exactly like real life, no variations or hidden fantasies. Just come home from a long shift, and re-work it in my sleep. That sucked >.<

]]> By: Sarah Suleski http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-1/#comment-988 Sarah Suleski Sat, 03 May 2008 11:39:41 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-01/#comment-988 <p>Thank you. :D</p> Thank you. :D

]]> By: erewhon http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-1/#comment-986 erewhon Fri, 02 May 2008 15:14:00 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-01/#comment-986 <p>So, I clicked a link from Tales of Mu, as I am often wont to do, and stumble upon treasure. </p> <p>This first chapter is really quite well done!</p> <p>I love the setting in the countryside, takes me back . . . .</p> <p>Russ seems like an interesting young fellow, and Liseli is just spot-on perfect, harried and rootless, drifting and dreaming . . . .</p> <p>Very well done!  I'll be reading.  :)</p> So, I clicked a link from Tales of Mu, as I am often wont to do, and stumble upon treasure. 

This first chapter is really quite well done!

I love the setting in the countryside, takes me back . . . .

Russ seems like an interesting young fellow, and Liseli is just spot-on perfect, harried and rootless, drifting and dreaming . . . .

Very well done!  I’ll be reading.  :)

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