Comments on: Chapter 24

By: Kunama

Kunama — Fri, 15 Aug 2008 16:48:12 +0000

"She had not worn in it her dreams."

in it vs it in ?

By: Sarah Suleski

Sarah Suleski — Fri, 07 Mar 2008 02:43:35 +0000

Thank you! Very much!

By: MAALewis

MAALewis — Thu, 06 Mar 2008 23:52:22 +0000

I just have to say you are a truly gifted writer. I found your story link on pages unbound having come upon it from Tales of MU having happened upon it from reading Something Posotive . . . .I know small (read frighteningly confusing) world. I started reading this morning while at work and have managed sixteen chapter . . . if only I had the time it would be 24. I am loving the story thus far and just felt I should tell you what a beautiful voice you have. I am a fairly regular contributor to A.E. and as soon as pay day rolls around I shall have to kick some your way in appreciation. I will also happily forward your story link to a great number of my friends. Thanks again its been awesome, please keep it up!

By: Maverix

Maverix — Thu, 06 Mar 2008 14:11:58 +0000

This is an interesting turn of events.. It shows a different side of her. I like it. She seems to have some respect for her father, at least.

By: Sarah Suleski

Sarah Suleski — Thu, 06 Mar 2008 02:29:09 +0000

I said to Chris; “I’d like it to be bigger.”

By: Nitschke

Nitschke — Thu, 06 Mar 2008 00:13:30 +0000

I like the different font size — much easier to read.

How did you change it, if you don't mind me asking?