Comments on: Chapter 25

By: Kunama

Kunama — Fri, 15 Aug 2008 17:08:52 +0000

"The Silver Road it a beautiful thing."

it vs is

By: The Cloaked Stranger

The Cloaked Stranger — Tue, 22 Apr 2008 16:47:08 +0000

I wonder how wise it was to let her live. After all, she certainly didn’t hesitate to kill and resurrect people indiscriminately, playing god on a whim. Given the chance, she’d probably do it again — she’s insane after all.

By: Nitschke

Nitschke — Wed, 12 Mar 2008 12:09:24 +0000

How could I have forgotten the crumpets!

By: Sarah Suleski

Sarah Suleski — Wed, 12 Mar 2008 03:42:11 +0000

Tea and crumpets with the Gate . . . you guys crack me up.

And flatter me with all your nice comments. Thanks.

By: Maverix

Maverix — Wed, 12 Mar 2008 03:37:13 +0000

Oh no. I wonder if he will be alright?

By: Ty

Ty — Wed, 12 Mar 2008 03:03:24 +0000

Tea is all very well, but would give her crumpets? That is the real test.
In all seriousness though – I adore this story, you have a wonderful imagination and you are a wonderful writer, thank you for publishing this where it can be appreciated by all and sundry!

By: Nitschke

Nitschke — Wed, 12 Mar 2008 00:15:43 +0000

Poor Russ, sick again!

Damn he was far too nice to Alisiya. Promises made under duress aren't really meant to be kept (imo).

And I like the gate. She's very sweet and I'd to invite her to tea.

By: Drew Daniels

Drew Daniels — Wed, 12 Mar 2008 00:02:39 +0000

Wow . . . I have to say that I've read through the entire story thus far and I'm truly captivated by what you've done here . . . I only wish that my story will turn out to be half as awesome as yours.

Well done. And keep up the good work.