That gave me a great laugh. Please, keep writing. I think I’m addicted now . . . 

Are you thinking of doing a lulu print?

This is by far one of the best reads I’ve had, ever. I write some on my spare time myself, and can only dream of writing as good as you do!

I’m hooked, and really looking forward to the next chapter . . . I am worried how Russ will wriggle himself of this though, and more worried of what will happen to Liseli when she eventually follows through the gate

Also:

So he looked up, unflinching, though the cold, inscrutable black of Ricalli’s eyes made him want to shrink back. Ricalli had the outward appearance of a young, robust man, but one look into his eyes left no doubt that he was old, very old.

That whole scene right there, the image, is so expressive . . . a tingling sort of feeling.  If I could draw I’d definitely draw that scene.  I don’t know why, but it just seem heroic and simple to me all at the same time.  Hmm.