Comments on: Chapter 29 Part 2

By: Sarah Suleski

Sarah Suleski — Tue, 08 Apr 2008 23:13:38 +0000

The elusive one! Gah. I need to talk cover art with you. If only I could catch you online.

By: Kitty

Kitty — Tue, 08 Apr 2008 08:17:35 +0000

There are errors because Sarah’s editor is a lazy, lazy bum who hasn’t been doing her job lately. For quite a while, actually. She should be fired, siriosly. Cough, cough.

What does it say that even though I’ve been around a;most since Alisiyad’s inception, lo these many years ago, and have read it a gazillion times, whenever I come around to check on progress, I can’t help reading a couple of chapters over again? XP

By: Donna Sirianni

Donna Sirianni — Wed, 02 Apr 2008 02:19:32 +0000

See, this is what happens when you have unprotected sex. Lifestyles, people. Lifestyles.

By: Sarah Suleski

Sarah Suleski — Mon, 31 Mar 2008 22:57:14 +0000

I don't mind corrections. I mind having made the mistake in the first place, heh. But thanks, I'll fix that.

The link should be fixed now too. I was in such a hurry to post it before Friday was over that I forgot to update the links. dur.

By: Trygve

Trygve — Mon, 31 Mar 2008 15:20:35 +0000

Whaaat, I didn’t knew there was a new chapter! Seems the link in part 1 is broken. That being said, I agree with Nitschke, we’ll definetively see more of that evil, sadly

Could I comment on spelling errors btw? I know theres authors who don’t like being corrected on spelling mistakes, so forgive me if I’m out of line

“circle of woman” . . . should be “circle of women”

“How woman” . . . should be “How a woman”

By: Drew Daniels

Drew Daniels — Mon, 31 Mar 2008 06:02:40 +0000

Wow . . . that was two things that I didn't expect . . . at all.

. . . Well Played.

By: Nitschke

Nitschke — Sat, 29 Mar 2008 04:11:20 +0000

Hmmm. Interesting. Not willing to write off Alisya just like that though.