Comments on: Chapter 32 Part 2 http://srsuleski.com by Sarah R. Suleski Fri, 29 Aug 2008 04:59:26 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Bacchante http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-32-part-2/#comment-1306 Bacchante Thu, 12 Jun 2008 20:45:48 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=166#comment-1306 <p>And not just sleep! I read it at work xD</p> And not just sleep! I read it at work xD

]]> By: Sarah http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-32-part-2/#comment-1297 Sarah Tue, 10 Jun 2008 23:15:16 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=166#comment-1297 <p>Ach.  Yes.  That word is sneaky, it took me a while to even see what you were talking about.</p> <p>Glad you're enjoying the story. :)  My plot to deprive people of sleep is working, mwuah ha ha ha!</p> Ach.  Yes.  That word is sneaky, it took me a while to even see what you were talking about.

Glad you’re enjoying the story. :)  My plot to deprive people of sleep is working, mwuah ha ha ha!

]]> By: pfors http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-32-part-2/#comment-1296 pfors Tue, 10 Jun 2008 22:27:32 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=166#comment-1296 <p>Good story, it's keeping me up long past my bedtime ;)</p> <p>"Unbidden, the sad eyes of her would-be child eyes appeared in Liseli’s mind, and she closed her own eyes as if it would help keep the vision away." An 'eyes' too many in there?</p> Good story, it’s keeping me up long past my bedtime ;)

“Unbidden, the sad eyes of her would-be child eyes appeared in Liseli’s mind, and she closed her own eyes as if it would help keep the vision away.”
An ‘eyes’ too many in there?

]]> By: Kitty http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-32-part-2/#comment-447 Kitty Tue, 08 Apr 2008 08:30:53 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=166#comment-447 <p>The role reversal thing is actually one of the real beauty things about the whole book.  Look at how the characters started out in the burger house, and look where they are now.  Now that's what I call "dynamic" characters.  The entire story's been leading up to this, basically.</p> The role reversal thing is actually one of the real beauty things about the whole book.  Look at how the characters started out in the burger house, and look where they are now.  Now that’s what I call “dynamic” characters.  The entire story’s been leading up to this, basically.

]]> By: Nitschke http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-32-part-2/#comment-374 Nitschke Sun, 06 Apr 2008 05:42:38 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=166#comment-374 <p>Hm . . . I should really re-read all the comments I've missed before I virtually repeat what Sarah said in the comment section of the previous chapter. </p> <blockquote> <p>.<</p> </blockquote> Hm . . . I should really re-read all the comments I’ve missed before I virtually repeat what Sarah said in the comment section of the previous chapter. 

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]]> By: Nitschke http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-32-part-2/#comment-373 Nitschke Sun, 06 Apr 2008 05:40:06 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=166#comment-373 <p>@ Donna I think one of the reasons you saw it as such a turnabout/role reversal is because Russ has grown up a LOT since we last saw him from Liseli's point of view. </p> <p>Also, with all the shit that Liseli has been going through, I think it's natural that she felt a bit of self doubt as well (which might be why I still had reservations about her view on Russ).</p> <p>Or maybe I'm just full of shit.  :p</p> <p>But it is nice to see Main Characters grow and . . . live, like in real life.</p> <p>I'm not really sure why it took me longer than Liseli to be satisified about Russ . . . but I'm glad it is and I'm glad they're together and I'm just a puddle of glad right now.</p> @ Donna I think one of the reasons you saw it as such a turnabout/role reversal is because Russ has grown up a LOT since we last saw him from Liseli’s point of view. 

Also, with all the shit that Liseli has been going through, I think it’s natural that she felt a bit of self doubt as well (which might be why I still had reservations about her view on Russ).

Or maybe I’m just full of shit.  :p

But it is nice to see Main Characters grow and . . . live, like in real life.

I’m not really sure why it took me longer than Liseli to be satisified about Russ . . . but I’m glad it is and I’m glad they’re together and I’m just a puddle of glad right now.

]]> By: Sarah Suleski http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-32-part-2/#comment-371 Sarah Suleski Sun, 06 Apr 2008 01:41:03 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=166#comment-371 <p>Yep, not the next chapter, but a few after that.  I'm in the midst of editing a chapter from his PoV even now. :)</p> Yep, not the next chapter, but a few after that.  I’m in the midst of editing a chapter from his PoV even now. :)

]]> By: Donna Sirianni http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-32-part-2/#comment-370 Donna Sirianni Sun, 06 Apr 2008 01:08:30 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=166#comment-370 <p>Ok, that's supposed to be * puppy eyes * but it looks like bookending asterisks makes things italics.  Interesting . . . </p> Ok, that’s supposed to be * puppy eyes * but it looks like bookending asterisks makes things italics.  Interesting . . . 

]]> By: Donna Sirianni http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-32-part-2/#comment-369 Donna Sirianni Sun, 06 Apr 2008 01:07:09 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=166#comment-369 <p>Ah, I see that, especially with her reliable take on everything.  My guess (speaking for myself) is that Russ's change was so sudden that it was hard to accept.  Not to mention Ricalli's a bastard and we saw that and what he would do to get what he wanted.  Liseli didn't so that seed of mistrust was with the readers because we were privy to information she wasn't.</p> <p>I'm hoping to read another chapter from Russ's POV just to see his take on everything that's going on.  Will we get those???  <em>puppy eyes</em></p> Ah, I see that, especially with her reliable take on everything.  My guess (speaking for myself) is that Russ’s change was so sudden that it was hard to accept.  Not to mention Ricalli’s a bastard and we saw that and what he would do to get what he wanted.  Liseli didn’t so that seed of mistrust was with the readers because we were privy to information she wasn’t.

I’m hoping to read another chapter from Russ’s POV just to see his take on everything that’s going on.  Will we get those???  puppy eyes

]]> By: Sarah Suleski http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-32-part-2/#comment-368 Sarah Suleski Sat, 05 Apr 2008 23:48:44 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=166#comment-368 <p>I just meant that once Liseli was satisfied that it was Russ I assumed everyone else would be as well.  Her suspicions were set to rest a couple parts back, after some initial doubts, and though she worries over the changes she notices in Russ she doesn't think it's not him.</p> I just meant that once Liseli was satisfied that it was Russ I assumed everyone else would be as well.  Her suspicions were set to rest a couple parts back, after some initial doubts, and though she worries over the changes she notices in Russ she doesn’t think it’s not him.

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