Comments on: Chapter 9 http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-9/ by Sarah R. Suleski Thu, 03 May 2012 05:39:25 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.5 hourly 1 By: Miladysa http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-9/comment-page-1/#comment-1991 Miladysa Mon, 06 Oct 2008 14:19:43 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-9/#comment-1991 <p>You painted this scene so well I felt as though I was there.</p> You painted this scene so well I felt as though I was there.

]]> By: Sarah Suleski http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-9/comment-page-1/#comment-707 Sarah Suleski Sun, 13 Apr 2008 16:17:30 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-9/#comment-707 <p>Er, yeah.  An inspection of all the doors in my house and a Google image search have convinced me that I can't have it both ways.  So I just took out the mention of him being able to see the hinges.  I'd rather have the door open inward.</p> Er, yeah.  An inspection of all the doors in my house and a Google image search have convinced me that I can’t have it both ways.  So I just took out the mention of him being able to see the hinges.  I’d rather have the door open inward.

]]> By: Cirne http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-9/comment-page-1/#comment-678 Cirne Sat, 12 Apr 2008 22:15:28 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-9/#comment-678 <p>If Russ sees iron hinges on the door when walking up to it, then shouldn't the door open outward?</p> If Russ sees iron hinges on the door when walking up to it, then shouldn’t the door open outward?

]]> By: The Cloaked Stranger http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-9/comment-page-1/#comment-38 The Cloaked Stranger Tue, 15 Jan 2008 18:15:20 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/alisiyad/chapter-9/#comment-38 <p>"I'm just innocently going to perpetrate some breaking and entering for no apparent reason . . . "</p> <p>I got the sense that something is compelling Russ to be in that room, and he doesn't have much choice about it.</p> <p>"Curiouser and curiouser . . . "</p> “I’m just innocently going to perpetrate some breaking and entering for no apparent reason . . . ”

I got the sense that something is compelling Russ to be in that room, and he doesn’t have much choice about it.

“Curiouser and curiouser . . . ”

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