Comments on: Part 19 http://srsuleski.com/dreamers/part-19/ by Sarah R. Suleski Mon, 16 Jan 2012 19:47:54 -0800 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.5 hourly 1 By: Vercin http://srsuleski.com/dreamers/part-19/comment-page-1/#comment-1867 Vercin Fri, 19 Sep 2008 02:55:25 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=283#comment-1867 <p>Comment sections seemingly existing to stroke the author, I'm tempted to say good things about the writing this chapter, and the story.</p> <p>Instead, I'll just note that Muse's selfishness is starting to wear on me. That's not a criticism, just a comment based on the characterization :) If she seems real, that's good.</p> Comment sections seemingly existing to stroke the author, I’m tempted to say good things about the writing this chapter, and the story.

Instead, I’ll just note that Muse’s selfishness is starting to wear on me. That’s not a criticism, just a comment based on the characterization :) If she seems real, that’s good.

]]> By: Chris Poirier http://srsuleski.com/dreamers/part-19/comment-page-1/#comment-1408 Chris Poirier Sat, 21 Jun 2008 07:14:08 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=283#comment-1408 <p>Beautiful shape to this chapter.  Love the way everything comes together at the end.  You've done a great job of integrating her disconnected longing into the prose, too.  Nice work.</p> Beautiful shape to this chapter.  Love the way everything comes together at the end.  You’ve done a great job of integrating her disconnected longing into the prose, too.  Nice work.

]]> By: Jonny Nowhere http://srsuleski.com/dreamers/part-19/comment-page-1/#comment-1301 Jonny Nowhere Wed, 11 Jun 2008 14:27:13 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=283#comment-1301 <p>Heh, I love it.  :)</p> Heh, I love it.  :)

]]> By: Cenge http://srsuleski.com/dreamers/part-19/comment-page-1/#comment-1300 Cenge Wed, 11 Jun 2008 05:45:02 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=283#comment-1300 <p>Beautiful.  I lost sleep to read this chapter.  I can't wait for the next one.</p> Beautiful.  I lost sleep to read this chapter.  I can’t wait for the next one.

]]> By: daymon http://srsuleski.com/dreamers/part-19/comment-page-1/#comment-1295 daymon Tue, 10 Jun 2008 21:45:39 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=283#comment-1295 <p>Wow all caught up, interesting place to leave off.  She was looking for the graveyard and didn't even know it.</p> <p>I hope does go looking for her.</p> Wow all caught up, interesting place to leave off.  She was looking for the graveyard and didn’t even know it.

I hope does go looking for her.

]]> By: Sonja http://srsuleski.com/dreamers/part-19/comment-page-1/#comment-1277 Sonja Sat, 07 Jun 2008 13:52:27 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=283#comment-1277 <p>I like the Twelve Dancing Frog Princesses book.  :)</p> <p>Argh cliff hanger!  That'll last a week.  :(</p> I like the Twelve Dancing Frog Princesses book.  :)

Argh cliff hanger!  That’ll last a week.  :(

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