Comments on: Part 24

By: Amanda

Amanda — Sat, 19 Jul 2008 21:24:42 +0000

It’s sad though.. that even when she thought he might have hit her she didn’t really care. It wasn’t betrayal or heart break. She didn’t even care if he broke her heart . . . I think she just wanted to feel both emotions. . . . otherwise her heart would still be aching . . . not broken . . . so sad.

By: Joanofarce

Joanofarce — Fri, 18 Jul 2008 19:47:09 +0000

Wow, very intense. I really love the poetic sentences. Makes me think is should be set to music.

By: Chris Poirier

Chris Poirier — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 16:50:39 +0000

Yes, I can agree to both your points: it’s those brief bits of hope that totally fuck you over when they end.

And it’s times like these that remind me I should be glad I’m not a teenager any more.

Hmmm. I should go write some Distance.

By: Sarah

Sarah — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 16:05:28 +0000

Thank you both. Now you see why I couldn’t wait till Saturday to post it.

I’m thinking heartache is something she knows well, but you need to really get your hopes up, think you have an actual chance with someone, to have your heart broken.

By: Sonja

Sonja — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 16:00:16 +0000

What an amazing chapter.

I loved it.

Kind of bouncing off Chris's point, but I never experienced "heartbreak" as a loner until I found a friend. Maybe it's different for different people?

By: Chris Poirier

Chris Poirier — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 13:42:04 +0000

Best. Chapter. Ever.

That was aweseome.

Just one point: “even betrayal, hatred, and heartbreak were things she only dreamt of”. When you grow up alone in a crowd, no friends, always on the outside, you know all about heartbreak.