Comments on: The Woman Who Searches, Part 1 http://srsuleski.com/queen-of-seven-bonus/the-woman-who-searches-part-1/ by Sarah R. Suleski Mon, 16 Jan 2012 19:47:54 -0800 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.5 hourly 1 By: Donna http://srsuleski.com/queen-of-seven-bonus/the-woman-who-searches-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-2202 Donna Sun, 23 Nov 2008 19:07:37 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=340#comment-2202 <p>So far I like this story of the queens the best.  It's all sorts of creepy that I so wish I could write.  That old man with the black eyes, just ambling around looking all harmless but knowing he isn't, it sends chills.  I love psychological fear.  It's so much scarier.</p> So far I like this story of the queens the best.  It’s all sorts of creepy that I so wish I could write.  That old man with the black eyes, just ambling around looking all harmless but knowing he isn’t, it sends chills.  I love psychological fear.  It’s so much scarier.

]]> By: anon y mouse http://srsuleski.com/queen-of-seven-bonus/the-woman-who-searches-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-1758 anon y mouse Tue, 05 Aug 2008 01:05:16 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=340#comment-1758 <p>"From the mist emerges a figure, an old man walking with the help of a cain." - do you mean <em>cane</em>?</p> <p>I was a little distracted by the present tense, actually.  But I think that was mostly due to the fact that you don't write in it normally, because this <em>is</em> well written.</p> <p>-A. mouse</p> “From the mist emerges a figure, an old man walking with the help of a cain.” – do you mean cane?

I was a little distracted by the present tense, actually.  But I think that was mostly due to the fact that you don’t write in it normally, because this is well written.

-A. mouse

]]> By: Sarah http://srsuleski.com/queen-of-seven-bonus/the-woman-who-searches-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-1464 Sarah Mon, 30 Jun 2008 02:56:59 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=340#comment-1464 <p>The one with Prelude in E Minor on it is called "Concerto of the Pines" and the artist is Lawrence Nash Groupé.  But it's not on iTunes, I checked. :(</p> The one with Prelude in E Minor on it is called “Concerto of the Pines” and the artist is Lawrence Nash Groupé.  But it’s not on iTunes, I checked. :(

]]> By: Ananta http://srsuleski.com/queen-of-seven-bonus/the-woman-who-searches-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-1462 Ananta Mon, 30 Jun 2008 02:37:26 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=340#comment-1462 <p>Ah, that story went perfect with the music.  Chopin's Prelude in E minor has such a haunting quality.  He wrote it while in a sanatorium, struggling with tuberculosis.  The sadness of that time is reflected in this piece.  Wow, I really admire the way that you were able to make the story have the same slow, mysterious, sad feel of the music.  Bravo! </p> <p>By the way, which Chopin album do you have?  I'll try and look it up on iTunes.  Thanks!</p> Ah, that story went perfect with the music.  Chopin’s Prelude in E minor has such a haunting quality.  He wrote it while in a sanatorium, struggling with tuberculosis.  The sadness of that time is reflected in this piece.  Wow, I really admire the way that you were able to make the story have the same slow, mysterious, sad feel of the music.  Bravo! 

By the way, which Chopin album do you have?  I’ll try and look it up on iTunes.  Thanks!

]]> By: Sonja http://srsuleski.com/queen-of-seven-bonus/the-woman-who-searches-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-1460 Sonja Sun, 29 Jun 2008 21:50:32 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=340#comment-1460 <p>In fact, it felt so natural that it didn't really click with me that it was in Present Tense until Part two.</p> In fact, it felt so natural that it didn’t really click with me that it was in Present Tense until Part two.

]]> By: Sarah http://srsuleski.com/queen-of-seven-bonus/the-woman-who-searches-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-1459 Sarah Sun, 29 Jun 2008 20:04:22 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=340#comment-1459 <blockquote>I really liked the voice and feel of this . . . so tangible.</blockquote> <p>yay!  This was my first attempt at writing something in present tense and I wasn't sure if it was working or not.</p>

I really liked the voice and feel of this . . . so tangible.

yay!  This was my first attempt at writing something in present tense and I wasn’t sure if it was working or not.

]]> By: Sonja http://srsuleski.com/queen-of-seven-bonus/the-woman-who-searches-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-1457 Sonja Sun, 29 Jun 2008 15:16:05 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=340#comment-1457 <p>oh and there's a part two link that I missed.  >.>  doh</p> oh and there’s a part two link that I missed.  >.>  doh

]]> By: Sonja http://srsuleski.com/queen-of-seven-bonus/the-woman-who-searches-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-1456 Sonja Sun, 29 Jun 2008 15:15:24 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=340#comment-1456 <p>Wow. </p> <p>This was amazing and sad and chilling and . . . I want more?</p> <p>I really liked the voice and feel of this . . . so tangible.</p> Wow. 

This was amazing and sad and chilling and . . . I want more?

I really liked the voice and feel of this . . . so tangible.

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