Comments on: Parents, Chapter 1 Part 2

By: Sarah

Sarah — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 15:51:35 +0000

Hee. I figured it out though.

By: Sam

Sam — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 08:50:46 +0000

"nght"

. . .

I'm SURE I wrote "knife" there.

By: Sarah

Sarah — Wed, 16 Jul 2008 01:29:11 +0000

Swearing's fine. I like to swear whenever possible.

It's been three years since Alisiyad, so Russ has had time to learn the knack of awesomeness. Heh heh.

By: Sam

Sam — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 13:28:42 +0000

Casey's an asshole. (I assume that seeing as you're fine with swears in your story, you're fine with them in comments? If not, tell me.)

Mind if I borrow that nght?

Also: Russ is suspiciously more awesome than he was in Alisiyad,

By: Sarah

Sarah — Sat, 07 Jun 2008 19:49:58 +0000

hands Donna a knife

By: Donna

Donna — Sat, 07 Jun 2008 15:40:27 +0000

Can I cut Casey?

By: Sarah Suleski

Sarah Suleski — Fri, 09 May 2008 23:03:15 +0000

Heh. It’s a typo party and I’m hosting. Thanks for pointing those out . . . .

By: The Cloaked Stranger

The Cloaked Stranger — Fri, 09 May 2008 21:31:02 +0000

self-suffcieny = self-sufficiency

Usually a good time steal a guy’s girlfriend, I’d say.

SHould be "Usually a good time TO steal a guys' girlfriend" right?

last past = last part

And last chapter Russ was just being a dumb male, unable to express his feelings but still caring about Liseli. Right now, he's being plain dumb: he should have gone home.

She's going to be so pissed if she finds out.

By: Sonja

Sonja — Wed, 23 Apr 2008 14:27:23 +0000

I named my car Jeeves, after the valet. Because it just keeps going and keeps me out of too much trouble.

/random

By: Sarah Suleski

Sarah Suleski — Tue, 22 Apr 2008 23:33:52 +0000

I named my car Casey.

Incidentally.

Wasn't name after the character, though.

/random