Comments on: Sweet Sixteen, Chapter 10 Part 2

By: anon y mouse

anon y mouse — Sun, 03 Aug 2008 02:00:22 +0000

Waves at SongCoyote. It's so nice to see you here. To quote Sam, "awesome".

-A. mouse

Sam — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 09:50:48 +0000

Coyote, that is awesome. You are awesome. Everything about this story is awesome.

Also: D'aawwwwww :3

(That is gonna be my response for every single scene with overwhelming cuteness)

SongCoyote — Tue, 24 Jun 2008 20:57:57 +0000

Sien’s lips open
The only door inside him
That should have stayed shut

He cannot be King
Even over his own heart
Which wants other things

Take care, bold stranger
The Queen’s passion for your touch
May undo you both

Light and laughter,
SongCoyote

Ananta — Tue, 24 Jun 2008 18:47:36 +0000

I wonder if Russ has ever heard of the Queen of Seven. Probably, since it was in the Journal.

Ivey — Tue, 24 Jun 2008 11:11:20 +0000

That was so cute, an eensy bit cliche’, but very cute.

Chris — Tue, 24 Jun 2008 04:48:14 +0000

Sounds like the date went well, except for the part where they wimped out on all the cool rides.

Sonja — Tue, 24 Jun 2008 01:01:26 +0000

I loved these two chapters!

And their masks, and eye patch and scoundrels and ohmygod. mmm <3