Comments on: Sweet Sixteen, Chapter 10

By: anon y mouse

anon y mouse — Sun, 03 Aug 2008 01:27:54 +0000

“Okay, I admit it, I don’t like the idea of Elly with any boy, but that’s not the point, here. I’m serious.” - does there need to be a comma after point?

I always loved the 'scary' rides. My biggest problem was finding someone to go on them with me.

-A. mouse

By: Sam

Sam — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 09:46:00 +0000

"Elly is young and naive and has no idea how disgusting guys can be!"

Heh. That is a lie. My namesake made sure of that.

By: Joanofarce

Joanofarce — Fri, 27 Jun 2008 19:27:46 +0000

i really like how Liseli has realized it is time to stop being mommy. I do wish that was the same for many parents out there.
it is now time to stop being a parent and work on being a friend and respected adult.

By: Ivey

Ivey — Mon, 23 Jun 2008 21:10:00 +0000

I remember having the same reaction about the knuckles on my first ride.
And yes, I’m probably going to be in this comment space for almsot every update because I now have more time to enjoy this lovely peice of work.

By: The Cloaked Stranger

The Cloaked Stranger — Mon, 23 Jun 2008 07:48:01 +0000

Oh, so your knuckles DO turn white. bwaaaaaaaah hah ha ha!

(I love Queen of Seven)