Comments on: Sweet Sixteen, Chapter 11

By: anon y mouse

anon y mouse — Sun, 03 Aug 2008 02:25:25 +0000

“She’d knew Marie was the best hacker in school, but this was above and beyond what she’d asked.” – she’d known or she knew, maybe?

The Cloaked Stranger, sometimes it’s fun to exaggerate for dramatic effect. And that would be quite messy if it were literal.

I wonder what will happen next; I guess I’ll just have to keep reading.

-A. mouse

By: Sam

Sam — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 09:56:54 +0000

And power of my sleep patterns. Everything gets put on hold while I’m reading this.

By: Ananta

Ananta — Thu, 26 Jun 2008 00:46:28 +0000

Ooh, loved the dream sequence! The Lost One is back, hmm? Curiouser and curiouser . . .

By: Dream

Dream — Thu, 26 Jun 2008 00:13:00 +0000

While you do not yet have the power over my bowels, you do over my dinner. I sat and stared blankly at the screen with my fork halfway to my mouth while i thought about the most recent chapter.

By: Sarah

Sarah — Wed, 25 Jun 2008 21:25:00 +0000

I can only dream of one day actually causing my readers to lose control of their bowels.

By: The Cloaked Stranger

The Cloaked Stranger — Wed, 25 Jun 2008 21:09:36 +0000

and more and more like The Child.

So Sien is falling in love and doesn't know what to do about it . . . .

This is sooooooo much better than Alisiyad (which was awesome) that I'm crapping my pants (Not Literally: the above is intended as hyperbole for Dramatic Effect)

By: Sonja

Sonja — Wed, 25 Jun 2008 18:43:58 +0000

The Lost One is still as creepy and sad as ever.

By: Bacchante

Bacchante — Wed, 25 Jun 2008 18:29:42 +0000

Nice, I like Marie.
The truth is in your hands . . . My cereal has a message for me! It says, “ooooooooooo.”