Comments on: Sweet Sixteen, Chapter 13 http://srsuleski.com/queen-of-seven/volume-3-chapter-13/ by Sarah R. Suleski Thu, 03 May 2012 05:39:25 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.5 hourly 1 By: Gavin Williams http://srsuleski.com/queen-of-seven/volume-3-chapter-13/comment-page-1/#comment-1749 Gavin Williams Sun, 03 Aug 2008 12:38:21 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=345#comment-1749 <p>Yay Queen of Seven!  (I've been unable to check updates for awhile, and it's good to be back)</p> Yay Queen of Seven!  (I’ve been unable to check updates for awhile, and it’s good to be back)

]]> By: anon y mouse http://srsuleski.com/queen-of-seven/volume-3-chapter-13/comment-page-1/#comment-1742 anon y mouse Sun, 03 Aug 2008 07:30:12 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=345#comment-1742 <p>At this point I think she still follows all of the rules, even if she doesn't think she wants to follow #4.</p> <p>And the people of Lsi probably feel they have reason to attack just as much as the people of Airidan feel they have the right to defend.  It's a very old war that is perpetuated by each subsequent generation.  At least, that's my take on it.</p> <p>-A. mouse</p> At this point I think she still follows all of the rules, even if she doesn’t think she wants to follow #4.

And the people of Lsi probably feel they have reason to attack just as much as the people of Airidan feel they have the right to defend.  It’s a very old war that is perpetuated by each subsequent generation.  At least, that’s my take on it.

-A. mouse

]]> By: Sarah http://srsuleski.com/queen-of-seven/volume-3-chapter-13/comment-page-1/#comment-1615 Sarah Thu, 17 Jul 2008 16:19:28 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=345#comment-1615 <p>Well if they'd just stop invading they wouldn't have any problems. :P</p> Well if they’d just stop invading they wouldn’t have any problems. :P

]]> By: Sam http://srsuleski.com/queen-of-seven/volume-3-chapter-13/comment-page-1/#comment-1599 Sam Thu, 17 Jul 2008 10:09:42 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=345#comment-1599 <p>I know which rule doesn't apply. Heh.</p> <p>Also: I feel sorry for the poor armies too. "They went back to Lsi where a man could believe what he saw"</p> I know which rule doesn’t apply. Heh.

Also: I feel sorry for the poor armies too. “They went back to Lsi where a man could believe what he saw”

]]> By: Sarah http://srsuleski.com/queen-of-seven/volume-3-chapter-13/comment-page-1/#comment-1479 Sarah Tue, 01 Jul 2008 21:55:55 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=345#comment-1479 <p>All typos are fixed.  Sorry for the messy chapter . . . I was dead tired when I was trying to edit it.</p> All typos are fixed.  Sorry for the messy chapter . . . I was dead tired when I was trying to edit it.

]]> By: Chris http://srsuleski.com/queen-of-seven/volume-3-chapter-13/comment-page-1/#comment-1474 Chris Tue, 01 Jul 2008 06:17:27 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=345#comment-1474 <p>Not to pile on overly much, but this sentence strikes me as odd:</p> <p>It is it not about the Heirs of Auriel controlling a puppet Queen.</p> <p>Anyway, enjoying the story, and I'm off to read part of this chapter.</p> Not to pile on overly much, but this sentence strikes me as odd:

It is it not about the Heirs of Auriel controlling a puppet Queen.

Anyway, enjoying the story, and I’m off to read part of this chapter.

]]> By: pfors http://srsuleski.com/queen-of-seven/volume-3-chapter-13/comment-page-1/#comment-1470 pfors Mon, 30 Jun 2008 18:45:50 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=345#comment-1470 <p>Um . . . , those tags didn't do quite what I'd hoped ;) "or her father at least, had been to those “otherworlds” or perhaps even come from one of them." come -> came</p> Um . . . , those tags didn’t do quite what I’d hoped ;)
“or her father at least, had been to those “otherworlds” or perhaps even come from one of them.”
come -> came

]]> By: pfors http://srsuleski.com/queen-of-seven/volume-3-chapter-13/comment-page-1/#comment-1469 pfors Mon, 30 Jun 2008 18:44:35 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=345#comment-1469 <p>Good chapter :) <cite>or her father at least, had been to those “otherworlds” or perhaps even come from one of them.</cite> came?</p> Good chapter :)
or her father at least, had been to those “otherworlds” or perhaps even come from one of them.
came?

]]> By: Sonja http://srsuleski.com/queen-of-seven/volume-3-chapter-13/comment-page-1/#comment-1467 Sonja Mon, 30 Jun 2008 15:15:40 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=345#comment-1467 <p>Yay!</p> <p>Couple typos though:</p> <blockquote>“I’m sorry I don’t meet you at the café.</blockquote> <p>and</p> <blockquote> “Well, there might another explanation for what you felt when you saw me.”</blockquote> <p>missing a b between might and another. </p> <p>Can't wait till part two!</p> Yay!

Couple typos though:

“I’m sorry I don’t meet you at the café.

and

“Well, there might another explanation for what you felt when you saw me.”

missing a b between might and another. 

Can’t wait till part two!

]]> By: Cirne http://srsuleski.com/queen-of-seven/volume-3-chapter-13/comment-page-1/#comment-1466 Cirne Mon, 30 Jun 2008 13:44:52 +0000 http://srsuleski.com/?page_id=345#comment-1466 <p>Hee!  I'm happy Elly is finally meeting Ren.  Looking forward to seeing what-all gets cleared up in part 2!</p> Hee!  I’m happy Elly is finally meeting Ren.  Looking forward to seeing what-all gets cleared up in part 2!

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