Comments on: Sweet Sixteen, Chapter 14

By: anon y mouse

anon y mouse — Sun, 03 Aug 2008 08:25:29 +0000

Thanks for the picture; I was picturing it on a longer, thinner board, to be displayed vertically.

I feel kind of bad for Hollie though; it was the only present her Grandpa had given her and now it's not really the same anymore.

-A. mouse

Sarah — Wed, 02 Jul 2008 20:08:12 +0000

Perfect!

I've been completely out of ideas for this week's bonus story.

Chris — Wed, 02 Jul 2008 19:43:13 +0000

“The old dog barely opened one eye and merely flicked his tale in response to Elly’s entrance.”

I’d be very interested in hearing the dog’s tale, since the other side stories have been very entertaining.

Sonja — Wed, 02 Jul 2008 06:00:36 +0000

That's pretty awesome.

She looks better that way.

Almost like C3PO meets Barbie and became a cyborg.

Or something. It's cool.

Sarah — Wed, 02 Jul 2008 05:26:23 +0000

Once upon a time I had the time and energy to actually make the Barbie art described in this chapter.

Sonja — Wed, 02 Jul 2008 05:23:28 +0000

I love Hollie’s and Adrian’s interactions. I feel bad for Adrian too, being left out the loop.