Comments on: Sweet Sixteen, Chapter 19

By: Kitty

Kitty — Mon, 12 Jan 2009 03:18:43 +0000

The fact that I knew it was not all going to end with sunshine and puppies and pretty flowers, doesn’t mean that I’m not disappointed xP

By: daymon

daymon — Thu, 30 Oct 2008 23:22:35 +0000

Elly is so upset with Sien but I think she will go to at least say goodbye. I would say if Sam tried anything Elly could just make some part of him vanish.

By: Josh

Josh — Thu, 30 Oct 2008 23:20:07 +0000

now im hooked on 2 of your unfinished stories!

By: Josh

Josh — Thu, 30 Oct 2008 23:17:24 +0000

. . . not to mention kill with a thought . . .

By: Sarah

Sarah — Wed, 29 Oct 2008 23:24:08 +0000

She can turn invisible. I wouldn’t worry to much about her . . . .

By: Luna

Luna — Wed, 29 Oct 2008 20:52:28 +0000

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Not having the next chapter is very akin to cruel and unusual punishment.

Fabulously done, btw.

(and I'm less worried about Sien right now than that she's alone, in a laundry room, at a probably loud party, in a skimpy outfit, where Sam can easily find/follow her)

By: Milene

Milene — Wed, 29 Oct 2008 14:27:33 +0000

I don’t know why I don’t trust Sien but I think that this is just a plan to trick Elly into going to Airidian

By: Sonja

Sonja — Wed, 29 Oct 2008 12:26:21 +0000

Elly's costume still sounds fantastic. Want!

Also? Poor Sien.

By: Khari

Khari — Wed, 29 Oct 2008 04:37:57 +0000

Why does this leave me wanting a sexy phoenix costume?

shivers can't wait for the next chapter!