Comments on: Sweet Sixteen, Chapter 5

By: Donna

Donna — Mon, 20 Oct 2008 23:19:36 +0000

I can honestly say I didn’t see that one coming! But an interesting segue . . .

By: anon y mouse

anon y mouse — Sat, 02 Aug 2008 08:40:48 +0000

AHA! I thought he was otherworldly.

I love the description of the bus.

I wonder what the rules are. I know, I know, all in good time.

Sien's a nice young man. He'll have to worry about more than just school fees; what about documentation?

-A. mouse

By: Sam

Sam — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 09:03:30 +0000

Heh. And now I start reading where I left off. I should have learned my lesson, but here I am, walking right into the snare again.

By: Sarah

Sarah — Wed, 16 Jul 2008 02:57:40 +0000

Thank you for reading and commenting so avidly. I believe I said “Holy Shit!” when I opened my email and saw them all. <3

By: Sam

Sam — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 15:57:36 +0000

Oh dammit. At the beginning of this chapter, I made a resolution to go to bed at the end of it. And just as it was getting good. I am SO glad that I found this in the holidays, I don't think that staying up until 4AM would be good for a schoolday.

Adieu, and thank you Sarah for creating this masterpiece.

By: Sarah

Sarah — Mon, 16 Jun 2008 07:28:39 +0000

SEE-en

And yes, where is my praise? I demand MOAR praise!

Thanks for catching the typos. It helps quite a bit. ^_^

By: pfors

pfors — Sun, 15 Jun 2008 20:57:37 +0000

“To properly cast the mood the old fashioned way they should really build a fire in the ground” moon?
Heh, I’m posting too many typos and too little praise. Loving the story.
How do you pronounce Sien?

By: Sarah

Sarah — Sat, 14 Jun 2008 00:08:57 +0000

Haha. I feel so . . . controlling . . .

By: Ivey

Ivey — Fri, 13 Jun 2008 12:19:17 +0000

At the first mention of other-worldness about these people I pounced on it like a prisoner on a scrap of meat. I’m SO HAPPY that you brought magical-involvement back! ^_^

By: Sarah

Sarah — Fri, 13 Jun 2008 00:43:25 +0000

Hmmm. Sien would make a cute hippie, though. :plots:

Not really. :p

(Thanks for the PU review btw ^_^)