Comments on: Sweet Sixteen, Chapter 9

By: anon y mouse

anon y mouse — Sat, 02 Aug 2008 22:25:22 +0000

I want to know more about the geckos! Ok, not really, I mean, it’s interesting and all, but part of the fun of learning things like that is talking to the person; I think I’d get along well with Noah.

If Sien only knew what Russ and Liseli went through to get together.

@Sam – you’re funny “ . . . and you are gonna like it!” Loved that. I don’t think it’s that simple, but I love the enthusiasm. I think he will like going out with her, and for him that’s the problem; he’s not supposed to. He’s conflicted; poor boy.

-A. mouse

By: Sam

Sam — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 09:41:24 +0000

Sien, you are going to go out wil Elly and you are gonna like it! You hear me?

By: The Cloaked Stranger

The Cloaked Stranger — Mon, 23 Jun 2008 07:42:49 +0000

Sien. From France. bwah haa haaaaa haaaaaa!

(I love Dan Aykroyd)

By: Ivey

Ivey — Sun, 22 Jun 2008 02:44:01 +0000

As an echo I’ll just repeat what everyone else has said.
I feel bad for Sien.
It sucks for all of this uncertainty.
And even though Elly can become invisi-girl on command she still may not believe in the other-worlds because her parents never told her about them.
My guess is that he eventually tells her, she freaks out on him, dmps him runs home to her parents. They look at eachother weird, explain it to her and she runs back to Sien as eh’s about to leave because the trailer miraculously worked all of a sudden.
But that’s my prediction, and the last thing your story is is predictable.

By: Ananta

Ananta — Sun, 22 Jun 2008 00:34:28 +0000

D— don't forget, Holli's also really good at sneaking around, or "moving silently" as we call it in D&D.

I love this quote from Sien:

"Her father and mother would never allow their daughter to date him if they knew where he lived, that he worked at a dirty old garage, and that he believed in the existence of a fantastical otherworld."

Hmm, he might be surprised . . .

I think I really like Sien now. Gee, I hope somebody does something about Sam— he's gonna do something awful some day. (but if he thinks he can victimize Elly, he's prolly gonna get a BIG, and hopefully unpleasant, surprise)

By: Sarah

Sarah — Sat, 21 Jun 2008 23:16:58 +0000

If they found out about Elly, they would then have to suspect all their kids; Eric’s affinity for extreme sports, Marc’s . . . something and Holli’s extra smartness.

Poor Marc. I just haven’t gotten around to what he’s into, yet.

@ Susan — All in one sitting?? Heh, that’s so cool. Thanks for reading. ^_^

By: Susan

Susan — Sat, 21 Jun 2008 18:54:16 +0000

So, I just read Alisiyad and all of Queen of Seven that's been posted in one sitting. I was so hooked I just couldn't stop.

This is such a captivating story and I just want to thank you for sharing it. It's certainly become my new favorite.

I'm just upset that I'll now have to wait for updates rather than flying through at my heart's content.

By: D

Sat, 21 Jun 2008 18:51:32 +0000

I also feel bad for Sien. There really should be a secret handbook on how to find the Queen and bring her back without screwing it up. Or, maybe there is and Ren has it stashed somewhere.

I have been thinking about how Russ and Liseli would react to the knowledge that their daughter is/might be the next Queen of an otherworld. I'm sure they would both be shocked and horrored but I think that if they thought about it, it would make a sort of sense, seeing as how they both have been to otherworlds and have been affected by it. It would, at least, confirm to them that they were affected and have the ability to pass their gifts on to their children. If they found out about Elly, they would then have to suspect all their kids; Eric's affinity for extreme sports, Marc's . . . something and Holli's extra smartness. The other thing about Elly being a queen is would Russ and Liseli let her go or could they even stop her?

By: Sonja

Sonja — Sat, 21 Jun 2008 16:02:59 +0000

I felt kinda bad for Sien.

Typo: What a bastard, she though

Thought I think.

Also the Thou Shalt Not bit was hilarious.