Comments on: Two Sisters, Chapter 1, Part 2

By: Gwenivive

Gwenivive — Fri, 05 Feb 2010 07:15:17 +0000

I love this story! Please keep writing it!!!

By: Lynette

Lynette — Sat, 30 Jan 2010 21:58:48 +0000

I have been waiting for this for a very long time. . . . and it was awesome!!! I can’t wait to find out what happens to them!!! Keep the awesomeness coming!!!

By: Coral

Coral — Fri, 22 Jan 2010 02:08:33 +0000

Hooray a new chapter! I hope your routine settles down, and I’m looking forward to seeing Airidan.

I like how both Elly and Sien have two “voices” inside – Elly literally and Sien with his conflicting roles. I wonder which will be dominant.

By: daymon

daymon — Thu, 21 Jan 2010 18:58:34 +0000

Well now, looks like Elly is going to have a tough time there. And I wonder if he will ever notice that there are two people infront of him when he talks to Elly.

Glad to see you back.

By: Sarah

Sarah — Tue, 19 Jan 2010 23:41:48 +0000

Yes, real life has settled into something more like routine (and Sarah desperately needs routine to be able to write anything, it would seem) so now all I have to do is figured out what is going on in the story . . . .

By: Cel, Keeper of the Frogs

Cel, Keeper of the Frogs — Tue, 19 Jan 2010 23:15:40 +0000

Yay! I am happy dancing all over the room!

By: Josh

Josh — Tue, 19 Jan 2010 17:06:23 +0000

Such great potential here. Been checking back here every week or so. Hope this means you got all that real life craziness sorted out!

By: G.S. Williams

G.S. Williams — Tue, 19 Jan 2010 13:48:07 +0000

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE . . .

Um, in case you were wondering, that's encouragement. And gratitude.

By: Kitty

Kitty — Tue, 19 Jan 2010 06:47:01 +0000

Hooray, awesome chapter! I hope this means there will be more coming soon (and often?!)